Fix grammar

diff --git a/office/webcam-streaming.xml b/office/webcam-streaming.xml
index c26c46a..f792012 100644 (file)
--- a/office/webcam-streaming.xml
+++ b/office/webcam-streaming.xml
@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ can also click on the webcam images above to switch to the regular version.</p>
 
 <div style="color:black;padding:0 20px;margin:10px 0; border-left:5px dotted red;">
 <p><b>Warning (updated on October 17, 2007)</b></p>
-<p>There is a report about the possible freezing in Safari 3, originally
-found on Mac OS 10.4.10, caused by the streaming version of visual feed
-from the office. The issue is currently under investigated. Please use
-with caution.</p>
-<p>If you experience similar problem, please write to our webmasters.</p>
+<p>There is a report about possible freezing in Safari 3, originally
+found on Mac OS 10.4.10, caused by the streaming version of the office
+webcam. The issue is currently under investigation. Please use with caution.
+</p>
+<p>If you experience a similar problem, please contact our webmasters.</p>
 </div>
 
 </section>

diff --git a/office/webcam.xml b/office/webcam.xml
index cf64cb2..9f6b5d6 100644 (file)
--- a/office/webcam.xml
+++ b/office/webcam.xml
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ the streaming version.</p>
 
 <div style="color:black;padding:0 20px;margin:10px 0; border-left:5px dotted red;">
 <p><b>Warning (updated on October 17, 2007)</b></p>
-<p>There is a report about the possible freezing in Safari 3, originally
-found on Mac OS 10.4.10, caused by the streaming version of visual feed
-from the office. The issue is currently under investigated. Please use
-with caution.</p>
-<p>If you experience similar problem, please write to our webmasters.</p>
+<p>There is a report about possible freezing in Safari 3, originally
+found on Mac OS 10.4.10, caused by the streaming version of the office
+webcam. The issue is currently under investigation. Please use with caution.
+</p>
+<p>If you experience a similar problem, please contact our webmasters.</p>
 </div>
 
 </section>