From 3c083ec46b7e466f543789b48abc318dca34e78e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dlslo <dlslo@uwaterloo.ca>
Date: Sat, 4 Feb 2023 22:41:17 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Personal page recopy

---
 pages/personal.tsx | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pages/personal.tsx b/pages/personal.tsx
index 4b18fb1..d5236d9 100644
--- a/pages/personal.tsx
+++ b/pages/personal.tsx
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is your favourite memory from your time at UW?"
-        bodyText="Most students' favourite memory relates to their time spent with friends and significant ones! This goes to show how friends are an important factor to our happiness! :D"
+        bodyText="Most students' favourite memories relate to their time spent with friends and significant others! This goes to show how important the people around us are!"
         align="right"
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is one thing that you wish you could tell your first year self?"
-        bodyText="In summary, don't spend too much time worrying about your grades or coop during university. Develop new hobbies, be more open-minded, and talk to more people! There's a lot to experience in university that you don't want to miss or regret! Drink responsibly!"
+        bodyText="In summary, don't spend too much time worrying about your grades or co-op during university. Develop new hobbies, be more open-minded, and talk to more people. There's a lot to experience in university that you don't want to miss or regret not being a part of. And as always, remember to drink responsibly!"
         noBackground
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is the nicest thing a classmate did for you?"
-        bodyText="Any small act of kindness can make someone else's day and remain etched in their memory for a lifetime! We see that a lot of the respondants' classmates helped them with their assignments and exams. Some participants remember fondly when their classmate asked them if they were ok and struck a conversation with them!"
+        bodyText="Any small act of kindness can make someone else's day and possibly remain etched in their memory for a lifetime. We see that a lot of respondents' classmates helped them with their assignments and exams. Some respondents fondly remember when their classmate asked them if they were okay and struck up a conversation with them."
         noBackground
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is the best life hack/tip?"
-        bodyText="We have a range of life hacks around submitting assignments, coding shortcuts, living a healthy life (sleeping and eating well), etc. Take notes! ;)"
+        bodyText="We have a wide range of life hacks about submitting assignments, coding shortcuts, and living healthily. Take notes and use them to your advantage!"
         align="right"
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is the best lesson you learned from your time at UW?"
-        bodyText="In short, always say 'yes' to opportunities as it can lead you to new experiences in life that you may enjoy! A lot of the small insignificant things you worry about won't matter at the end. Take care of yourself. Most importantly, enjoy your life is a message that most students agree with."
+        bodyText="In short, challenge yourself to get out of your comfort zone; new opportunities and experiences can help you grow and you might even find something new that you really enjoy! A lot of the small, insignificant things you worry about won't matter in the end. Most importantly, be sure to take care of yourself, enjoy your life and savour each moment!"
         noBackground
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is one aspect of your life that makes you the happiest?"
-        bodyText="Relationships whether friendships or romantic ones and hobbies are the aspects of CS 2022 students' life that make them the happiest!"
+        bodyText="Both romantic and platonic relationships, as well as hobbies, are the areas of respondents’ lives that make them the happiest!"
         align="right"
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ export default function Personal() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What advice would you give current/future CS students at UW?"
-        bodyText="Big recap: Socialize. Take care of yourself and your mental health. Do things beyond school and coop."
+        bodyText="The main takeaways here are to be social, take care of yourself and your mental health, and do things beyond just school and co-op. UW is a truly unique experience and you should try to make the most of all aspects of it!"
         noBackground
         align="center"
       >