data/academics.ts

@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ export const A7 = [
     value: 4,
   },
   {
-    category: "Combinatorics & Optimization",
+    category: "C&O",
     value: 1,
   },
   {

data/mental-health.ts

@@ -289,6 +289,7 @@ export const H9 = [
 ];
 
 export const H9i = [
+  "If you ever feel your mental health is declining, don't be afraid to talk to your profs and TA's about it, they're all there to help you. Don't isolate yourself from your friend group, as that'll only make things worse. The most important thing is to not keep everything bottled up.",
   "Mental health at Waterloo is pretty bad. The environment generates a lot of pressure and people crack very much under that pressure.",
   "Everyone deals with mental health. You aren't some special snowflake, and you also aren't immune. It will always get better once you accept that and are able to talk about it at least to yourself. ",
   "Take breaks",
@@ -296,7 +297,6 @@ export const H9i = [
   "Don't be afraid to reach out for help, therapy is worth it!",
   "Competition at Waterloo can be tough on mental health sometimes.",
   "It is pretty scary that you could just be totally unknown in university, nobody would never know anything that happens to you. I feel that a lot of people with mental health problems can go down like this.",
-  "If you ever feel your mental health is declining, don't be afraid to talk to your profs and TA's about it, they're all there to help you. Don't isolate yourself from your friend group, as that'll only make things worse. The most important thing is to not keep everything bottled up.",
   "Consider reaching out to professionals if you are struggling with mental health. However, it is completely normal to try multiple therapists until you can find the one that really vibes with you.",
   "UW has terrible support nets for students who are struggling. This is the biggest differentiator between UW and say a liberator arts college. Recognizing that you are on your own is an important step to taking control of your own mental health.",
   "I think the support systems for mental health in university are definitely less structured, and it's easier to 'fall through the cracks', especially being away from long-time friends and family from your hometown.",

pages/academics.tsx

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ export default function Academics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What is your favourite programming language?"
-        bodyText="The favourite programming language award for the class of 2022 goes to…PYTHON! No surprise here - it reads the most like English. C++ is a very notable language as a part of the CS program; thus, it’s no surprise it comes in second. It looks like we’ve come a long way from the days of Racket in first year!"
+        bodyText="The favourite programming language award for the class of 2022 goes to… PYTHON! No surprise here - it reads the most like English. C++ is a very notable language as a part of the CS program; thus, it’s no surprise it comes in second. It looks like we’ve come a long way from the days of Racket in first year!"
         align="center"
         noBackground
       >
@@ -161,15 +161,15 @@ export default function Academics() {
             <BodyLink href="https://uwflow.com/course/music140">
               MUSIC 140
             </BodyLink>
-            ,
+            ,{" "}
             <BodyLink href="https://uwflow.com/course/music246">
-              MUSIC 246 l
+              MUSIC 246
             </BodyLink>
             , and{" "}
             <BodyLink href="https://uwflow.com/course/clas104">
               CLAS 104
             </BodyLink>{" "}
-            being crowd favourites`
+            being crowd favourites!
           </p>
         }
         align="center"

pages/demographics.tsx

@@ -62,11 +62,12 @@ export default function Demographics() {
         heading="Please select the gender identity option(s) with which you identify."
         bodyText={
           <p>
-            About 33% of students identified as women or gender non-conforming
+            Unsurprisingly, most respondents were men at around 69%. About 31%
-            (women+). This statistic has been steadily increasing throughout the
+            of students identified as women or gender non-conforming (women+).
-            years, as seen at{" "}
+            This statistic has been steadily increasing throughout the years, as
+            seen{" "}
             <BodyLink href="https://uwaterloo.ca/women-in-computer-science/statistics">
-              this link
+              here
             </BodyLink>
             . According to the same source, in 2017/2018 (when many 2022
             graduates were admitted), around 24% of CS admits, 34% of CFM
@@ -75,9 +76,9 @@ export default function Demographics() {
             it is promising that a more diverse range of people are becoming
             interested in CS! Take a look at clubs such as
             <BodyLink href="https://wics.uwaterloo.ca/"> WiCS </BodyLink> and
-            <BodyLink href="https://www.techplusuw.com/"> Tech+ </BodyLink>
+            <BodyLink href="https://www.techplusuw.com/"> Tech+</BodyLink> that
-            that address these issues and work to provide an inclusive
+            address these issues and work to provide an inclusive environment in
-            environment in UW&apos;s tech scene.
+            UW&apos;s tech scene.
           </p>
         }
         align="right"
@@ -108,7 +109,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
             have chosen two or more of the listed categories. We have counted
             each of them as a separate entry rather than a category itself.
             Check out clubs such as
-            <BodyLink href="https://www.techplusuw.com/"> Tech+ </BodyLink>,
+            <BodyLink href="https://www.techplusuw.com/"> Tech+</BodyLink>,
             which supports ethnic minorities in tech!
           </p>
         }

pages/friends.tsx

@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="How often do you stay in touch with friends that you made during co-op?"
-        bodyText="Many people don’t keep in touch with friends made during co-op. This makes sense as each co-op term only lasts a short period of time and a remote co-op experience can also affect friendships. It can also be difficult for many students to keep in touch."
+        bodyText="Many people don’t keep in touch with friends made during co-op. This makes sense as each co-op term only lasts a short period of time and a remote co-op experience can also affect friendships. It can also be difficult for many students to keep in touch afterwards due to the fact that interns can be from different programs and universities"
         align="right"
       >
         <div className={styles.graphContainer}>

pages/mental-health.tsx

@@ -182,7 +182,21 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="Have you used UW Health Services for your mental health?"
-        bodyText="UW Health Services is a program that provides accessible medical services. It’s great to see a chunk of our respondents were able to utilize it for their benefit and we hope that these services continue to be used even more in the future. University life is stressful, and turning to UW Health Services is something you would not be alone in doing. To book an appointment with them, you can call (519) 888-4096 or email hsforms@uwaterloo.ca if you are unable to book by phone."
+        bodyText={
+          <p>
+            UW Health Services is a program that provides accessible medical
+            services. It’s great to see a chunk of our respondents were able to
+            utilize it for their benefit and we hope that these services
+            continue to be used even more in the future. University life is
+            stressful, and turning to UW Health Services is something you would
+            not be alone in doing. To book an appointment with them, you can
+            call (519) 888-4096 or{" "}
+            <BodyLink href="mailto:hsforms@uwaterloo.ca">
+              email hsforms@uwaterloo.ca
+            </BodyLink>{" "}
+            if you are unable to book by phone.
+          </p>
+        }
       >
         <div className={styles.graphContainer}>
           <PieChart data={H5} {...pieChartProps(isMobile, pageWidth)} />
@@ -191,7 +205,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="How was your experience with UW Health Services?"
-        bodyText="Our respondents have a wide range of opinions and feedback about their experiences with UW Health Services. Here is some of the feedback that was provided:"
+        bodyText="Our respondents have a wide range of opinions and feedback about their experiences with UW Health Services. Here is some of the feedback that was provided."
         noBackground
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>
@@ -257,7 +271,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="Please give any general comments about mental health in university."
-        bodyText="With mental health being such a large concern in university, many of our respondents have commented on this topic. Here are some quotes from students that describe how UW’s environment affects students’ mental health as well as suggestions for improving mental health:"
+        bodyText="With mental health being such a large concern in university, many of our respondents have commented on this topic. Here are some quotes from students that describe how UW’s environment affects students’ mental health as well as suggestions for improving mental health."
         align="right"
       >
         <div className={styles.quotationCarouselContainer}>

pages/miscellaneous.tsx

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ import { useWindowDimensions } from "utils/getWindowDimensions";
 import { useIsMobile } from "utils/isMobile";
 
 import { BarGraphVertical, BarGraphHorizontal } from "@/components/BarGraph";
+import { BodyLink } from "@/components/BlankLink";
 import { BottomNav } from "@/components/BottomNav";
 import { ComponentWrapper } from "@/components/ComponentWrapper";
 import { Header } from "@/components/Header";
@@ -47,7 +48,18 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="How many hours per week do you spend on the UW subreddit?"
-        bodyText="There’s a reason why r/uwaterloo (link to: https://www.reddit.com/r/uwaterloo/) is one of the most popular university Reddit communities. It is very highly propelled by students, with over 87k members as of January 2023, and even has some profs on there too! Check it out if you haven’t heard of it!"
+        bodyText={
+          <p>
+            There’s a reason why{" "}
+            <BodyLink href="https://www.reddit.com/r/uwaterloo/">
+              r/uwaterloo{" "}
+            </BodyLink>
+            is one of the most popular university Reddit communities. It is very
+            highly propelled by students, with over 87k members as of January
+            2023, and even has some profs on there too! Check it out if you
+            haven’t heard of it!
+          </p>
+        }
         align="right"
       >
         <BarGraphVertical
@@ -82,7 +94,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="Have you considered dropping out of university or transferring to another university?"
-        bodyText="Around one over six thought about leaving or transferring, so you’re not alone if you have also considered this option! Wanting to transfer to another university can be caused by students feeling lonely in their program, feeling overwhelmed by the schoolwork required in that program, disliking the UW campus/campus life, etc."
+        bodyText="Around one in six respondents thought about leaving or transferring, so you’re not alone if you have also considered this option! Wanting to transfer to another university can be caused by students feeling lonely in their program, feeling overwhelmed by the schoolwork required in that program, or disliking the UW campus/campus life."
         noBackground
       >
         <div className={styles.graphContainer}>

pages/post-grad.tsx

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ export default function Demographics() {
 
       <ComponentWrapper
         heading="What will be your first-year total compensation in CAD?"
-        bodyText="The tech field has interesting levels of annual compensation - these numbers speak for themselves… 😜 Compensation can include a combination of salary, signing, first-year stock, and bonus. Many numbers are converted from USD to CAD. The conversion rate was approximately 1 USD = 1.26 CAD during the time frame of the survey."
+        bodyText="The tech field has interesting levels of annual compensation - these numbers speak for themselves… Compensation can include a combination of salary, signing, first-year stock, and bonus. Many numbers are converted from USD to CAD. The conversion rate was approximately 1 USD = 1.26 CAD during the time frame of the survey."
         noBackground
       >
         <BarGraphVertical