From 7dbe630e9ceff446d56f2a2fd2d173927ca94998 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sean Hunt <scshunt@csclub.uwaterloo.ca>
Date: Wed, 10 Sep 2014 14:17:34 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] jbroman's comments

---
 about/constitution.xml | 17 ++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about/constitution.xml b/about/constitution.xml
index 872cad7..6f7b744 100644
--- a/about/constitution.xml
+++ b/about/constitution.xml
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
       the next term. If the membership fee changes, then this does not affect
       the validity of any membership terms already paid for.</li>
 
-    <li> The Club may grant access to its systems, free of charge, to members of
-      the University community in order to offer them services. This does not
-      constitute membership.</li>
+    <li> The Club may grant access to its systems, either free of charge or for
+      a fee, to members of the University community in order to offer them
+      services. This does not constitute membership.</li>
   </ol>
 </section>
 
@@ -125,9 +125,8 @@
 
         <li> Each election shall be carried out by secret vote, in a manner to
           be decided on by the CRO, with the approval of the members at the
-          meeting.  An accurate count of votes for each candidate for each
-          position must be made and recorded by the CRO. A simple
-          heads-down-hands-up method is considered acceptable.</li>
+          meeting. A simple heads-down-hands-up method is considered
+          acceptable.</li>
 
         <li> The CRO shall not vote except to break a tie.</li>
 
@@ -185,7 +184,7 @@
         <li> to call and preside at all general, special, and executive meetings
           of the Club, except during the election of officers;</li>
         <li> to appoint special committees of the Club and the membership and
-          chairmen of such committees, with the approval of the Executive
+          chairs of such committees, with the approval of the Executive
           Council; and</li>
         <li> to audit, or to appoint a representative to audit, the financial
           records of the club at the end of each academic term.</li>
@@ -198,7 +197,7 @@
       <ol>
         <li> to assume the duties of the President in the event of the
           President's absence;</li>
-        <li> to act as chairman of the Programme Committee;</li>
+        <li> to chair the Programme Committee;</li>
         <li> to appoint members to and remove members from the Programme
           Committee;</li>
         <li> to ensure that Club events are held regularly; and</li>
@@ -226,7 +225,7 @@
     <li> The duties of the System Administrator shall be:
       <ol>
         <li> to chair the Systems Committee;</li>
-        <li> to appoint members to and remove members from the Programme
+        <li> to appoint members to and remove members from the Systems
           Committee.</li>
         <li> to ensure that the duties of the Systems Committee are
           performed.</li>